tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8239290591767305882.post6616876904500644807..comments2022-10-03T12:09:53.373+05:30Comments on Direct Dil Se!!: Ik Soch Anjani Si!!Simardeep Singhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14232536888443803234noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8239290591767305882.post-82328064627296321362014-03-08T16:37:13.052+05:302014-03-08T16:37:13.052+05:30aaye is jahan me hum bhi,
yehi hamara thikana hai,...aaye is jahan me hum bhi,<br />yehi hamara thikana hai,,<br />Kyon rakhte ho anjaan humko,,<br />ye bhi yo humara zamana hai,,<br /><br />khilti huyi kaliyan hain hum,,<br />phool banne do Hame, khushbu de jayenge,<br />na kuchlo samazik riwajon k tale,,<br />hum Ruth Gaye to fir na ayenge,,<br />hosh ik bar apne sambhal k dekho,,<br />khud ko kya zinda paoge?<br />Jo karte ho wyawahar hamse kya khud ko doshi nahin paoge?<br />har rasm Aur riwazon me jaakadkar bhi humne thaani hai,,<br />naari hain hum abla nahin,, <br />Ab hak se ladne ki baari hai,,<br />kavita ki Kalam se,, on this special day..<br /><br />nicely written simar,, I appreciate the efforts and thoughtsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8239290591767305882.post-74540228098215559602010-04-22T21:37:47.551+05:302010-04-22T21:37:47.551+05:30seriusly u wrt very wel as 2dy as v r in 21st cent...seriusly u wrt very wel as 2dy as v r in 21st century,bt grls r still subjected to d tyranny of discrimination.. though said to b a man's btr half..n dis discrimination whch preceeds her birth n is thr thru out hr life. being a grl i can understand n truly ur words r describing d truth.. very gud its an awesm one..Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12556848549266646596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8239290591767305882.post-57117344406353351022010-03-22T14:38:22.599+05:302010-03-22T14:38:22.599+05:30A very true and meaningful poem. Hope that one day...A very true and meaningful poem. Hope that one day all of these differences could just stop. Thank you so much for sharing. Regards, Tulsinder Kaur.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8239290591767305882.post-90876364175387800162010-03-15T21:09:07.413+05:302010-03-15T21:09:07.413+05:30Veru Nice. Really too good. Touching. and inspirat...Veru Nice. Really too good. Touching. and inspirational too. I wish all have the same thought one day.Manmeethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10939545811308931102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8239290591767305882.post-71646669220242363152010-03-13T17:21:33.232+05:302010-03-13T17:21:33.232+05:30hey simar,very nice n provoking composition. n spc...hey simar,very nice n provoking composition. n spcly d very last lines<br />"Mile jo aisa pyar yahan pe, <br />har ladki kahe yehi dua tum dijo<br />Srishti ki anmol rachna hum,<br />Agle janam mohe bitia hi kijo"<br />i found these lines very touching. n also the inclusion of those guru nanak dev ji's lines..is very apt.<br />hey my gift was really worthed. thanx.bhajan preethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09701807133440669594noreply@blogger.com